Title: Eating Healthy vs. Taking Diet Pills, Working Out vs. Steroids
Benefits from eating healthy and working out
Intro: Why eating healthy is good and benefit from it.
1st paragraph: What diet pills consists of.
a.
b.
c.
2nd paragraph: Benefits from taking diet pills.
a. easier to lose weight
b. get slim faster
c.
3rd paragraph: side affects
a. after 6 months ur body starts to tolorate the medication
b.
c.
4th paragraph: How it affects your body.
a. ur body builds a tolorance and after u gain that tolorance you start gaining wright again
b.
c.
5th paragraph: Is it worth it? (in this portion I wanted to put examples if people who didn't think taking diet pills was worth it)
a.
b.
c.
2nd intro for steroids: why working out is good and benefit from it.
1st paragraph: What steroids consists of.
a.
b.
c.
2nd paragraph: Benefits from taking steroids.
a. easier and faster to gain muscles
b. help most muscles in ur body to become stronger
c.
3rd paragraph: side affects
a. more vounrable do getting sexually transmitted diseases
b. higher risk of getting heart attack, stroke, and liver failure
c.
4th paragraph: How it affects your body.
a. higher risks of death
b. higher risk of infection
c. can't play sports if your cought using steroids
5th paragraph: Is it worth it?
a.
b.
c.
conclusion: summarize everything into a few sentences
I think that your outline is quite clear, but you would have to work on your intro, abstract and conclusion a little more, since they are not as clear as they can get to be, although i got the point of the paper and your sections do support your thesis quite well the only thing that I believe can help a bunch in your actual paper would be using examples of diet pills, and their effects, since there are a bunch of different diet pills, and use examples from athletes that used or use steroids and what they think of them, or maybe how they got into them and use like what athletes than had never used them, what they think about them.
ReplyDeleteHi Max,
ReplyDeleteI like the title of this paper and the idea that we need find ways to make food and fuels helpful to our training as athletes. This outline is incomplete however. Please let me know when it is updated.